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Tears

June 4, 2012
By PoetLaureate274 PLATINUM, Manitowoc, Wisconsin
PoetLaureate274 PLATINUM, Manitowoc, Wisconsin
20 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have not even begun to scratch the surface of how important your life means to not only me, [y]our friends and [y]our family, but your life, which is a gift for the world that is waiting for you." - Brent Smith.


finally the tears come..
finally they wash down my cheeks.
bringing redemption,
with their warm, wet touch.
I'm falling,
deeper and deeper.
climbing into the hole I promised myself I'd never go near.


The author's comments:
This was inspired by a very recent personal struggle I have had recently, which drove me to tears, and at one point, insanity.

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on May. 24 2014 at 10:49 am
PoetLaureate274 PLATINUM, Manitowoc, Wisconsin
20 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have not even begun to scratch the surface of how important your life means to not only me, [y]our friends and [y]our family, but your life, which is a gift for the world that is waiting for you." - Brent Smith.

Thank you!

on May. 24 2014 at 10:48 am
PoetLaureate274 PLATINUM, Manitowoc, Wisconsin
20 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have not even begun to scratch the surface of how important your life means to not only me, [y]our friends and [y]our family, but your life, which is a gift for the world that is waiting for you." - Brent Smith.

Thank you very much. While written a while back, this poem still holds true to this day.

on Apr. 19 2013 at 11:44 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)<br /> Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

Another poem and that is short and simple, yet holds so much depth and emotion.  Tears are something that I love writing about, I believe that this one peom has done perfection in talking about tears. 

on Jul. 18 2012 at 9:10 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

amazing!!!