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June 27, 2012
By nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

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Wipe my tears when they fall
Be there at my every call
Kiss me goodnight before I sleep
My heart is forever yours to keep
When it’s time for you to leave
My eyes shall be dry, I shall not grieve
It’s okay, it’s alright
It’s your time to find the light
Though you are gone, in my thoughts you’ll always be
Your last words, your last plea
I shall follow to a tee
“Please, please never forget me.”

© Kelly G., Norwell, MA

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This goes hand-in-hand with my other poem Remember me. Be sure to read it! Thanks!
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spudbud GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 1:36 pm
spudbud GOLD, Newton, Kansas
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&quot;Where is the wise man? Where is the scholar? Have they not been made such a fool in their squalor?<br /> <br /> For they desired a sign and sought for the wise<br /> <br /> When the precursor of life was right in front of their eyes&quot; - Wolves at the Gate

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LOVE THIS. Added it to my favorites.
Apollo77 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 2:43 pm
Apollo77 PLATINUM, Brunswick, Ohio
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&quot;All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence that you know.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Madame, all stories, if continued far enough, end in death, and he is no true-story teller who would keep that from you.&quot;<br /> -Ernest Hemingway

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I think this is really pretty, i like this one a little better then the other, and i think the emotionis a bit deeper.
hippiechick99 GOLD said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 7:26 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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&quot;... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;<br /> To tell one&#039;s name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog&quot;<br /> -Emily Dickinson

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I think this poem is great and the rhyming is very creative. I like the simplicity, when most of the time, in poems, I don't. This is a change from what I usually read and I like it. Well done :)
TheLittleThings SILVER said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 8:25 pm
TheLittleThings SILVER, Bronx, New York
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wow this is really good... <3 
Hayley567 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 1:15 pm
Hayley567 BRONZE, Columbus, Georgia
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she is amazing this is very good 5 stars for her 
nakubara PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2012 at 1:33 pm
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
27 articles 18 photos 84 comments

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Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

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This was done by my daughter and I think she did an awesome job. She is very talented and I love her very much.