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My World

July 17, 2012
By TheVoice SILVER, Marquette, Michigan
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TheVoice SILVER, Marquette, Michigan
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"Nature and books belong to the eyes that see them." --Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Imagine.
Tall, majestic mountains.
Trees.
Flowers.
Clear skies.
No war.
Persecution.
Hate.
Pain.
Unnatural death.

My world.

A world we should
all
strive for.
A simpler world,
where children played
outdoors.
Where war isn't sold as a
video game.

The sun i always
shining in
my world.
Only on the days
when the sky provides the
life-giving rain
is it gray.

The cemetery has
few.
Drugs are
unheard of.
Alcohol is for
special occasions.
And tobacco is
illegal.

My world is
peaceful.
My world is
uncorrupted.
My world is
pure fantasy.

© Julia K., Old Tappan, NJ

The author's comments:
I actually thought of this while I was watching the news. The world is in such a problem state right now, and we need to all help to repair the rips and tears we've made.
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Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 6:58 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
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A very somber ending to a great poem. Your poetry gets better every poem you write.
elizamc83 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 6:32 pm
elizamc83 GOLD, Concord, Massachusetts
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really nice poem!! it's sad that the world isn't the way you describe your fantasy world. keep up the good work!
EatSleepWrite95 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 6:23 pm
EatSleepWrite95 GOLD, Dallastown, Pennsylvania
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Love the stanza on drugs an alcohol. So very true. I wish the world were actually like this.
MakeMyWaffles GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2012 at 3:23 pm
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its unfortunate this world is pure fantasy. because a world like that would be great.
DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 12:11 pm
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Wow this was really good. I like the line a world without war in video games. Awesome line. I really feel the need of helping this world change. Great message! Suggestion: I challenge you to come up with more examples in your world.
nakubara PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 6:26 pm
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Wow thats beautiful,  would love to live in your world :).