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My Evil Twin

October 15, 2012
By I-Love-EDM SILVER, Hamilton, New Jersey
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Pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding. It is the bitter potion by which the physician within you heals your sick self. Therefore, trust the physician. Drink from its cup of remedy in silence and tranquility.

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I have an evil twin
That has an evil heart
Full of evil things
He was evil from the start

EVIL is his first name
DARKNESS is his last
Everything he touches
Just breaks like fragile glass

He laughs at death
He stares it in the face
The devil is his brother
My twin is a walking disgrace

He lives his life to the fullest
Evil, wild and free
You might not know who he is
But my evil twin is me

© Karen S., Norwalk, CT

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This article has 6 comments.

AnushLoveee17 GOLD said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 8:19 pm
AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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sometimes you have to forget whats gone appreciate what still remains and look forward to whats coming next

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Np baby I love u honey <3
I-Love-EDM SILVER said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 12:27 pm
I-Love-EDM SILVER, Hamilton, New Jersey
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Pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding. It is the bitter potion by which the physician within you heals your sick self. Therefore, trust the physician. Drink from its cup of remedy in silence and tranquility.

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thanx baby lol
AnushLoveee17 GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2013 at 1:59 pm
AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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sometimes you have to forget whats gone appreciate what still remains and look forward to whats coming next

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Nice poem, but i dont believe that ur evil :)
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 18 2012 at 12:45 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
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&quot;I was NEVER that drunk.&quot; -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

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ooohh! i love it! 5/5
chrisvfree PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 24 2012 at 11:30 am
chrisvfree PLATINUM, N/A, Florida
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Wow, what a powerful conclusion to the poem "My evil twin is me." Nice imagery and a very steady rhyme scheme. Keep writing!
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 1:40 pm
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
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That's really good! Punctuation needed though:) Nice style:)