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December 28, 2012
By Beef. PLATINUM, Kenmore, Washington
Beef. PLATINUM, Kenmore, Washington
29 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Does my sexiness upset you? <br /> Does it come as a surprise <br /> That I dance like I&#039;ve got diamonds <br /> At the meeting of my thighs? <br /> - Maya Angelou, Still I Rise<br /> <br /> Nothing ends<br /> Nothing ever ends<br /> - Dr. Manhattan, Watchmen


He bought them yellow raincoats
But yellow isn't their color
Construction yellow.
Just like the road signs
Before they fell

He bought her a gray leather jacket
But gray makes her sad
Deadpan gray.
Just like the weather
Before they moved

I bought him a baby blue blazer
It brings out his eyes
Cornflower blue.
Just like his father's
Before they clouded



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Beef. PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 2:03 am
Beef. PLATINUM, Kenmore, Washington
29 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Does my sexiness upset you? <br /> Does it come as a surprise <br /> That I dance like I&#039;ve got diamonds <br /> At the meeting of my thighs? <br /> - Maya Angelou, Still I Rise<br /> <br /> Nothing ends<br /> Nothing ever ends<br /> - Dr. Manhattan, Watchmen

Why thank you!

on Dec. 30 2012 at 11:27 pm
ottersarah SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everywhere, man blames nature and fate, yet his fate is only the echo of his character and passions, his mistakes and his weaknesses

Your use of imagery is perfect. I can see and feel the textures of the colors. Well done!