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January 15, 2013
By CWells_521 DIAMOND, Greene, New York
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CWells_521 DIAMOND, Greene, New York
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Favorite Quote:
The best things in life are unseen, that&#039;s why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream.<br /> What doesn&#039;t kill you, only makes you stronger.

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I like when you cry
Let your flaws trickle out
I like when you break down
No so strong, are you now?
I like when your skin
Bleeds through your shirt
I like when the mirror
Hurts your eyes for sure
I like when you drink
The truth breaks through instead
I like when the drugs
Takeover your head
I like when you torture
Your pretty little self
I like when they see
Your life is a hell
I like when you fade
Innocence replaced with pain and lies
Can’t take the girl you’ve turned into
I like when you die

© Elisabeth R., Elmont, NY

The author's comments:
For all those girls who can't take the perfection. It's hard to believe, but no one's perfect. Everyone hurts, even when you can't see it.
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CWells_521 DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 20 2013 at 6:07 pm
CWells_521 DIAMOND, Greene, New York
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The best things in life are unseen, that&#039;s why you close your eyes when you kiss, cry, or dream.<br /> What doesn&#039;t kill you, only makes you stronger.

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thank you!
onedaymore143 SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2013 at 5:57 pm
onedaymore143 SILVER, Conifer, Colorado
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I wanna be the girl he gives his hoddies to, and cuddels up to when its cold, He&#039;ll be the one who comes up behind me and wraps his arms around his waist, catchs off gaurd and says you are beautiful.

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that was REALLY beautiful i think we have a similar writing topic, mines just the other point of veiw. Keep writing