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Tears to heaven

January 21, 2013
By Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
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Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. <br /> Lao Tzu

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Could our tears be sucked up to heaven and be traded for one dear loved one can a whole seven, seven tears are they enough enough for a fair trade would you trade seven tears for just one person How much would you give for just one to live ?

© Elizabeth H., San Bernardino, CA

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Court901 BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2013 at 2:03 pm
Court901 BRONZE, Magnolia, Texas
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&quot;Imagniation is not a talent of some people, but it is the health of every person&quot; -Ralph Waldo Emerson

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The title really caught my attention. You have a really good idea here and I like the last sentence. But I do agree with AmyLeigh.
AmyLeigh GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 7:16 pm
AmyLeigh GOLD, Pompton Lakes, New Jersey
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&ldquo;One thing about human beings that puzzles me the most is their conscious effort to be connected with the object of their affection even if it kills them slowly within.&rdquo;<br /> - Sigmund Freud

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I really love the idea of this poem, however I found reading it a little difficult. I think maybe if you spaced out the lines a little more, it would be easier to follow. As it stands, it reads a little like a run-on sentence.