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Lonely Star

February 10, 2013
By Mid1996 BRONZE, Jefferson City, Tennessee
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I'm always around
But not always seen
You're looking right at me
Right through me actually
Like I'm not even there
I'm high in the sky saying
"Look at me"
But, only at night
Does anyone notice me

© Emily L., Redmond, OR

The author's comments:
In my poetry class I was given the starter "Write from the point of view of a star during the daytime, when it's right there but we can't see it." It's not my best but a good quick exercise.
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