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she is my flower

February 12, 2013
By raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.<br /> <br /> ~Barbara de Angel


she was my flower,
she made my heart stand still,
she is my flower,
my daffodil.

I am her wall,
so sturdy and tall,
I am her wall,
cracks and all.

She is my will,
my power to live,
she is my will,
she keeps my heart active.

I am her bow,
she my arrow,
I am her buffalo,
she my doe.

She is my sunshine,
so bright and warm,
I am her clouds,
just before a storm.

finally,I'm her planet,
she my star,
we both love each other,
but only from afar.


The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this poem when my girlfriend broke up with me.

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on Jan. 1 2014 at 7:30 pm
Firefaerie SILVER, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do not pity the dead. pity the living, and above all, those who live without love&quot; - J.K Rowling<br /> &quot;There&#039;s always another secret&quot; -Brandon Sanderson

Loved it absolutely loved it :)

on Nov. 7 2013 at 11:27 am
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.<br /> <br /> ~Barbara de Angel

thank you yall!!  i havent been online for a long time, but i apreciate all the feedback. i will try to post more poetry   :)

on Aug. 23 2013 at 8:11 pm
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What does not kill you makes you stronger!&quot; or<br /> &quot;Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself&quot; Love doesn&#039;t bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

Love it so beautiful

on Jul. 4 2013 at 4:20 pm
SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
29 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I will work harder&quot; (animal farm boxer the horse)

This is the sweetest poem i've ever read in my life :) I love the way you worded everything. The rhyme sceme in this poem made it catchy and songlike C: great job!!!!!

on Jun. 9 2013 at 9:57 pm
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.<br /> <br /> ~Barbara de Angel

thank you   :)  thats so kind

on Jun. 3 2013 at 10:34 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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This is just beautiful! Wonderful job! I'm very surprised they haven't published this in their magazine! Keep trying! ~Free ;)(:

on Apr. 21 2013 at 7:24 pm
Chattyquill SILVER, --------------, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never shall I forget those things, even were I condemned to live to live as long as God Himself. Never.<br /> -Elie Wiesel

i told you i oved this poem, no doubt others would love it too :)

on Apr. 20 2013 at 5:59 pm
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.<br /> <br /> ~Barbara de Angel

thank you  :)

on Apr. 20 2013 at 2:52 pm
Apostolic-Girl SILVER, Athens, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
...But there are still stars in the dark night sky...

I totally love this... I never thought you would be the romance type ray, but i admit this is AWESOME!!!!

TheMadBrine said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 4:50 pm
TheMadBrine, Sylvania, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A good library will never be too neat, or too dusty, because somebody will always be in it, taking books off the shelves and staying up late reading them.&rdquo; Lemony Snicket

This is cool! I am not one for poetry though haha but good nonetheless:)

on Apr. 15 2013 at 1:10 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

'Aw this is cute! I really like this one with its imagery. Applausos

on Apr. 11 2013 at 12:14 am
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.<br /> <br /> ~Barbara de Angel

thank you all you guys   :)

on Apr. 11 2013 at 12:09 am
PriyaModi BRONZE, Indore, Other
1 article 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
I like the way i am,need no transformation,,,LOVE LIFE.

nice one..your flower might be happy reading this

on Apr. 3 2013 at 10:31 pm
EnnaGirl SILVER, Sacramento, California
9 articles 2 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the change you want to see in the world<br /> - Ghandi

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!! it was so moving, so sweet. FANTABULOUS JOB!!  

on Mar. 30 2013 at 11:19 am
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness&quot;

i really liked your poem

Powla SILVER said...
on Mar. 25 2013 at 11:56 am
Powla SILVER, PHX, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
You can complain that roses have thorns, or you can rejoice that thorns have roses.<br /> -Ziggy-

the endings sad :( but i like it

Lydia3 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2013 at 11:10 pm
Lydia3 BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Always Expect The Unexpected For It Most Likely Won&#039;t Happen&quot;

Awesome poem

on Mar. 19 2013 at 10:28 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i love it al lot

on Mar. 19 2013 at 10:26 am
Hannah_Ignatiuk16 BRONZE, Bryant, Arkansas
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i really liked the layout of the poem and it felt like you ment it