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Firefly

February 14, 2013
By JoyMason PLATINUM, Arapahoe, Nebraska
JoyMason PLATINUM, Arapahoe, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
You, he who subdued me, be not insolent, forget not the beauty of virtue.


Firefly shining in light. Firefly in flight.
It can't stumble and fall, for it hardly walks at all.
Children love to catch, as the sun goes down, as it lands neatly on the ground.
Jars of glass, lid of metal.
When handling be, oh so, gentle.
At the end of the fun, let it go, into the warm summers nigh.
You look back, before going inside as flying flashes of light go by.
Who says fire can't fly?



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on Dec. 10 2013 at 4:32 pm
JoyMason PLATINUM, Arapahoe, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
You, he who subdued me, be not insolent, forget not the beauty of virtue.

i really don't pay attention to making ends meet as much as i probably should, i admit, but still. and spelling errors came with typing fast while looking at my book of poems, that might be the reason for that. thanx for reading and replying 0u0

on Dec. 10 2013 at 4:27 pm
JoyMason PLATINUM, Arapahoe, Nebraska
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You, he who subdued me, be not insolent, forget not the beauty of virtue.

yes, ur right, writing IS my dream and i never planned on stopping, i like my work 2.       thanx 0u0

on Dec. 10 2013 at 4:24 pm
JoyMason PLATINUM, Arapahoe, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
You, he who subdued me, be not insolent, forget not the beauty of virtue.

thanx, i enjoy it 2, but i wrote it bcuz me and my ex did this 1ce with little kids, it wuz a lot of fun         0u0

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 18 2013 at 6:50 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

i always like poems about fireflies :)  

fayfay1137 said...
on Sep. 1 2013 at 2:46 pm
fayfay1137, Arapahoe, Nebraska
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u r an awesome writer and i love your work. let me know when u publish more. Don't Stop writing cause its obvious that this is ur dream, 

on Aug. 28 2013 at 1:53 pm
LaChouette GOLD, Mount Vernon, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;And then there are the times when the wolves are silent and the moon is howling.&rdquo;<br /> - George Carlin

This is a sweet poem! I like it! I do notice that the rhyme scheme is good, but some of the lines are a bit longer than others so the ends don't meet the way they should. There were maybe one or two spelling errors but it's not too bad. I love the last sentence though. It's really nice. Overall, you did a good job. Nice work!