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He's Proud

March 5, 2013
By Hannah_Ignatiuk16 BRONZE, Bryant, Arkansas
Hannah_Ignatiuk16 BRONZE, Bryant, Arkansas
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*silence*
the sun comes up
*silence*
i see a figure in the distance
*snap*
i slowly pull the gun up
*breathe*
i sight in the deer
*breathe*
i squeeze the trigger
*click*
i look at my dad
*trembling*
he didn't load the gun
*shaking*
dad loads the gun
*breathe*
i sight in one the deer again
*breathe*
i squeeze the trigger again
*pop*
the deer drops to the ground
*grin*
tears stream down my face
*ears ring*
my dad grins
*i did it*
he's proud
i finally made him proud.


The author's comments:
This is about killing my first deer and finally making my daddy proud.

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on Mar. 19 2013 at 10:17 am
Hannah_Ignatiuk16 BRONZE, Bryant, Arkansas
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Thanks for your comment and it only took my 5minutes to write

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Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

wow, i really like this.