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Tenderness of her Body

April 7, 2013
By romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns


I try to realize,
Where the tenderness of love was discovered,
As I felt this tenderness 1st in this body,


When I kissed my lover's lips
The moment was majestic,

Her eyes were truly romantic with red
I wanted to feel it again,

Though kept it for tomorrow
Cause I saw my lover,


Still intensely immersed in a new tenderness
Its hard to explain, but so easy to sustain
I was in a deep agony,


As I wanted to have it again
I didn’t say about it to my soul mate

Knowing then a deep shyness she will strongly restrain
This the 1st part of love,


You can see the shyness above
Then tomorrow comes, we kissed then again
I felt a new deep tenderness,


I realized this is called romance
I don’t know I fell in this substance,
As the feelings are different & im absorbed in the tenderness

The effect is love, love never cant be enough


The author's comments:
its a sweet romantic poem

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on Jun. 25 2013 at 2:21 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

Hi there :) that was a sweet poem :) your usage of '1st' instead of first made the poem a bit awkward. The meaning is still the same but it's visually out of place in the poem.

MMOON PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2013 at 2:09 am
MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
26 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sop being afriad of what could go wrong. Start being positive about what could go right&quot;<br /> I also have another &quot;Loving someone is like hugging a cactus. The harder you hold the more it hurts&quot;

Beautiful. I really enjoyed it. Keep writing!  

on Apr. 19 2013 at 1:25 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

A very nice one. Though you have some grammatical mistakes that trip it up. Smooth those over, and it will enhance the poem. I like how the tenderness doesn't end up really being her body but your connection to her- how you care for her. Good job.

Phoenix. said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 4:52 am
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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I like how much feeling you put in this poem i think you did a great job! :)

on Apr. 15 2013 at 1:10 pm
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
The beautiful thing about writing is that you don&#039;t have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier

Really mushy XD I like it! :)

on Apr. 15 2013 at 11:21 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i luv keep writing like :)