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Tenderness of her Body

April 7, 2013
By romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
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romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
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love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns

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I try to realize,
Where the tenderness of love was discovered,
As I felt this tenderness 1st in this body,


When I kissed my lover's lips
The moment was majestic,

Her eyes were truly romantic with red
I wanted to feel it again,

Though kept it for tomorrow
Cause I saw my lover,


Still intensely immersed in a new tenderness
Its hard to explain, but so easy to sustain
I was in a deep agony,


As I wanted to have it again
I didn’t say about it to my soul mate

Knowing then a deep shyness she will strongly restrain
This the 1st part of love,


You can see the shyness above
Then tomorrow comes, we kissed then again
I felt a new deep tenderness,


I realized this is called romance
I don’t know I fell in this substance,
As the feelings are different & im absorbed in the tenderness

The effect is love, love never cant be enough

© Emily B., Houston, TX

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its a sweet romantic poem
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AugustSummerFling PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2013 at 2:21 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

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Hi there :) that was a sweet poem :) your usage of '1st' instead of first made the poem a bit awkward. The meaning is still the same but it's visually out of place in the poem.
MMOON PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2013 at 2:09 am
MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
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Beautiful. I really enjoyed it. Keep writing!  
LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 1:25 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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A very nice one. Though you have some grammatical mistakes that trip it up. Smooth those over, and it will enhance the poem. I like how the tenderness doesn't end up really being her body but your connection to her- how you care for her. Good job.
Phoenix. said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 4:52 am
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I like how much feeling you put in this poem i think you did a great job! :)
LivelyJade SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 1:10 pm
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
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Really mushy XD I like it! :)
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 11:21 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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i luv keep writing like :)