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April 19, 2013
By ksmiley8100 SILVER, Cashmere, Washington
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ksmiley8100 SILVER, Cashmere, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let your fears decide your fate."

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I don’t want you to worry if you’re left alone
The stars will always guide you home
I don’t want you to be afraid when you’re the last one there
You’ll always have someone that will care
Just look up into the sky
Remember
You can do anything you want if you try
It’s up to you
I’ll help you do what you need to do
I’ll grab your hand and we can fly away
We can laugh
We can cry
We can waste the day
Everything we do, it’ll be together
I promise we will last forever

© Kari S., Mesa, AZ

The author's comments:
This is the first poem I wrote. I wrote it for my best friend who was having troubles figuring out where she belonged within her family and friends. I wanted her to know that I'd always be there for her.
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ksmiley8100 SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 8:57 pm
ksmiley8100 SILVER, Cashmere, Washington
6 articles 3 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Never let your fears decide your fate."

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Thank you(: I've been trying to do that with my newer poems so thank you for the advice.
Childofthemind BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 6:42 pm
Childofthemind BRONZE, San Marcos, California
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i agree with bubbs it is a little to generic
Kaayelynn BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 5:42 pm
Kaayelynn BRONZE, Wahpeton, North Dakota
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&quot;Stop War.<br /> Hug More.&quot;<br /> &hearts;

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._. i love this. ♥
Bubbs GOLD said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 12:42 pm
Bubbs GOLD, Rowlands Gill, Other
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Awesome! I love it, Your friend is lucky to have you!! I found it a little predictable though, you should try writing things that are less obvious and make us try to figure out what your poetry is about. Hope this helps :) 
evalash PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 12:28 pm
evalash PLATINUM, Jennings, Louisiana
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love is a gamble

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Great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should check out my work.