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You, Me, We, Them

April 30, 2013
By Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
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You are the knife
That slashes
Gradual, tormenting

I am the bandage
That heals
Quietly, fragile

You leave a scar
Foul and throbbing
On you children's hearts
Becasue you beleive
"With every scar, a story."

© Tiana D., Monument, CO

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Csquared GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 6:19 pm
Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Thank you so much!!! That meas a ton to me!
sophistryxo SILVER said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 11:22 am
sophistryxo SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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&ldquo;There was nowhere to go but everywhere, so just keep on rolling under the stars.&rdquo;<br /> -Jack Kerouac

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WOW. I really wish I had written that. Honestly, this was so powerful, I've read it six times now. Great work!
Csquared GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 3:13 pm
Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
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    Thanks! I have a lot of stupid errors like that in this poem. (Like spelling errors and stuff). My typing ability was off that day...  
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 3:06 pm
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Very well written. (Just "you" should be yours next to children.) Very clever in separating the stanza with different thoughts. And how everyone represents something unique. 
Csquared GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2013 at 11:03 am
Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Thank you!
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Wow this is powerful. So much hidden meaning. I love it.. 
Csquared GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2013 at 11:03 pm
Csquared GOLD, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Thanks! I like short and simple. :-)
Lost_In_Space BRONZE said...
on Jul. 20 2013 at 10:38 pm
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I really like how you had such a short poem, that had such a strong meaning, Those 3 verses have an amazing meaning that follow with them