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Spills

May 23, 2013
By erialexia PLATINUM, Waterford, Michigan
erialexia PLATINUM, Waterford, Michigan
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It spills
It spins
Bringing wreckage to the land
Lightning rolls and bites the hand
Now rolling blood spills down the land



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on May. 24 2013 at 12:38 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.&rdquo;<br /> <br /> ― Mary Oliver

I like the use of rhyme you have in this poem, however, I think it needs more. Perhaps you could add  another stanza? Good Job, though!