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June 14, 2013
By Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime&quot; ~ Celine Dion<br /> &quot;If you&#039;re going to pray don&#039;t worry... if you&#039;re going to worry don&#039;t pray.&quot; ~ Mariah Carey

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A thousand times we needed you
A thousand times we cried
If love alone could have saved you
You never would have died
A heart of gold stopped beating
Two twinkling eyes closed to rest
God broke our hearts to prove he only took
The best
You meant so much to all of us
You were special and that’s no lie
You brightened up the darkest day
And even the greyest sky
Not a day goes by that you are not in our hearts and soul

© Gary N., Houston, TX

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This is for everyone who has lost someone.
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Angel1932 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2013 at 1:48 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
33 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime&quot; ~ Celine Dion<br /> &quot;If you&#039;re going to pray don&#039;t worry... if you&#039;re going to worry don&#039;t pray.&quot; ~ Mariah Carey

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Thank you for taking the time to read it :) all of your lost loved ones are looking down on you im sure :) 
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2013 at 11:29 am
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
24 articles 6 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it&#039;s yours, if it doesn&#039;t, it never was.&quot; - Unknown

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This is beautiful. I have lost a lot of relatives in my life. My mom says, "People in our family drop like flies." I can really relate to this and I love the way this poem flows. Incredible job :)
Angel1932 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2013 at 6:30 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime&quot; ~ Celine Dion<br /> &quot;If you&#039;re going to pray don&#039;t worry... if you&#039;re going to worry don&#039;t pray.&quot; ~ Mariah Carey

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Thank you for taking the time to read it! :)
DawnieRae BRONZE said...
on Jul. 20 2013 at 10:50 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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This is such a lovely poem. Thank you for writing it!