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Dancing Air

August 20, 2013
By FiddleBunny BRONZE, New Providence, New Jersey
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FiddleBunny BRONZE, New Providence, New Jersey
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Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass... It's about learning to dance in the rain.

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I find myself alone
Just the walls, me, the floor
Cool air floating in the atmosphere
Press my cheek on the cold floor
Cold seeping into me
Awakening
Dance across the room
Imagining wind blowing my hair wild
As wild as I want to be
Sliding across smooth floors
Like ice
As my bare feet kick up the settling air
It swirls around me in patterns around my feet
Little particles that brush around me
As everything disappears into breezy
Air

© Ankaret E., Brampton, England

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.king. SILVER said...
on Aug. 21 2013 at 6:26 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡&deg;)

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It's pretty good, except that you repeated the word "around" more than twice :/,  I think it may have been better if you said " Litte particles that brush against me.."  or something, but other than that I think it's pretty good.   :)
BlottedInk said...
on Aug. 21 2013 at 6:22 pm
BlottedInk, Searsmont, Maine
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&quot;The most wasted day of all is that on which we have not laughed.&quot; -Nicholas Chamfort

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i actually FELT that poem. I really like this. I can relate...this how i feel when dancing :) Nice job