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September 11, 2013
By maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
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let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

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Thoughts like ice pierce my soul
Threatening to swallow me whole

They come from to and fro
Where the go next no one knows

© Sara D., Aiken, SC

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HornyUnicorn69 said...
on Nov. 15 2013 at 12:51 pm
The less words that are written, the more powerful something becomes. Short and simple, yet quite powerful and deep in meaning. I like when writers do this. Great job.
RozaAlexander said...
on Nov. 15 2013 at 12:48 pm
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i really like this, even with the small amount of lines, its really good  
maelstrom14 GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2013 at 11:59 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
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thank you hannah it means a lot. really.
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on Sep. 21 2013 at 11:57 pm
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This is a great poem thats very thorough in only a short amount of lines. Its beautiful, in an eerie sort of way, and I loved every word. It had to be read over and over again to get the overall essence of the poem, which was very intriguing. I loved it! Keep it up