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September 24, 2013
By kendall96 BRONZE, Sumas, Washington
kendall96 BRONZE, Sumas, Washington
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You thought i was just a cigarette
but all I do is take and take
till theres nothing left to give
till all thats left is you
because thats what I do

Your friends are by your side
and your lungs are almost fried
the day they told you to stop
you haven't forgot

Just remember
it wasn't only me
you let me in
so i took control

And now your end is near
it will be over as soon as you can say
what have i done with my life anyway


The author's comments:
i no longer smoke and i thought i should tell others about how smoking controls your life

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Katie96 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2013 at 2:19 pm
Katie96 BRONZE, Sumas, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love and be loved in return."

love the message anmd how the words run together so smoothly!

on Oct. 27 2013 at 11:34 pm
meckenzie BRONZE, Sumas, Washington
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great poem i hope u get a good grade on it!!

meckenzie said...
on Oct. 27 2013 at 11:33 pm
good poem, i hope u get a good grade on it!!

Meckenzie said...
on Oct. 27 2013 at 11:22 pm
great poem!!! 

on Oct. 27 2013 at 11:13 pm
kendall96 BRONZE, Sumas, Washington
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please comment on the poem, this is for school and i need comments to get credit.