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drawing blook with pain
October 30, 2013
I can no longer breathe
yet i force myself to do so
i look out at the moon
my tears are rain drops from the storm clouds above
no one knows
how pain i truly contain
which only grows stronger day after day
i would rather die than to keep going like i am
But suicide is not an option
so all i can do is force myself to keep going
although i know it will create a darker place in which i do not wish to return
so instead i walk in the storm and
hide behind a tree to cry my rainy tears
that stain my shoes
and now
i
draw blood eternally by only my pain from my now
forever
and
always
BROKEN
heart
© Asia B., Hudson, MA
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That was very sad and dark but still deep and very descriptive. I'm starting to think that you only look on the dark side and write only about pain. But what can I say?! A poet is born from pain ^_^ this only to say that you are a great poet and very talented when it comes to talk poetically. My opinion on this is that you seem to be a nice, kind and cool girl and if this guy didn't see it, well believe me IT'S HIS LOSS...I'm not just saying it, I MEAN IT ;) My other opinion is that you are such an amazing girl that he might not bare the thought of comparing himself to you and alwats being lower than you. So keep progressing and believe in yourself cuz no one else is gonna do the work for you. Keep your faith strong in yourself. Keep up the Great work and Thanks for sharing this
and when i talked to him the first time he said that here is a possibility that we would be getting back together and them i talked to him again the other day and now he says no way at all are we ever getting back together. I hope you enjoyed my poem. Please rate and comment. thank you