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Lone Love

December 10, 2013
By SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
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SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

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Oh my love, oh my love!
Where did you go?
I wander the path
Waiting for the surprise
Of seeing you in daylight!

Oh my love, oh my love!
Why hide from me so?
I long and I look yet
You evade me so.
Wake up my love, Wake up!

Oh my love, oh my love!
Why aren't you here?
The furious attempts to find you
Yet you lead me here.
I need you!

Oh my love, oh my love!
Where have you been?
I've searched and searched
Yet I find you here again.
Inside my dreams
Inside my mind
Breaking my heart one more time.

© Lauren S., Reading, Berkshire, UK

The author's comments:
True story. I keep seeing this guy in my dreams, but when I wake up, I can't remember his name.
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SlowEternity BRONZE said...
on Jan. 13 2014 at 7:04 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

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Thank you! I really appreciate it!
Drac-in-Black GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2014 at 9:56 pm
Drac-in-Black GOLD, London, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Never apologizing for feeling. When you do so, you apologize for the truth." - Benjamin Disraeli

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Simple and beautiful. Flows smoothly, and coveys so much emotion.
PissOff SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2013 at 3:03 am
PissOff SILVER, Vaughan, Other
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Okay, some one banned me from the chat room, so god help me. Tell the others I send my love, and that I'll try to get unbanned. Even though I don't knw why.
SlowEternity BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2013 at 2:36 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
4 articles 15 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

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Author's comments: I can't remeber his name, or face. Sorry forgot to add that. :P