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You Said With a Smile

December 4, 2013
By Ashley_Przywara BRONZE, West Valley, New York
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Before I left,
You said with a smile,
See you later alligator.
I’ll see you in a while.

You puffed your cigarette,
Nice and slow,
And never did I ever
Really want to go.

While I was gone
I missed you so much.
I longed for your hugs,
Your kisses, your touch.

Just like that you were gone.
It was only three days later,
I didn’t know what to say but,
I’ll see you later alligator.

© Beth S., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
This piece I wrote in loving memory of my grandmother who was my best friend and raised me up to be who I am today. I could never thank her enough.
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