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The Reaper

December 23, 2013
By Aswin.A SILVER, Doha, Other
Aswin.A SILVER, Doha, Other
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

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I am what I am


My eyes grow tired, my thoughts fail me
A strange weakness grips me, my body grows limp.
Death's withered hands reach out to me
In embrace? Is it love? Kindness perhaps, to one weary soul
As I die, as I waste, as I look back
What do I feel? What do I think ?
Joy? Sadness? Regret? Never..
I feel nothing, but fear
Fear, for those left to face Mother Earth's wrath
Fear, as I prepare to meet my maker
Fear, for the infinite expanse beyond...



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on Mar. 18 2014 at 9:26 am
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
16 articles 1 photo 81 comments

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it'll be okay, if it's not okay it's not over.

i love the poetic sadness to this piece. i love sad poems. i thought it was a great poem and it made me think about things with a different light. ha ha it made me think about how fragile life is i guess lol if that makes any sense.

on Jan. 24 2014 at 8:31 pm
Carly_Elizabeth PLATINUM, Othello, Washington
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&quot;And above all, watch with glittering eyes the whole world around you because the greatest secrets are always hidden in the most unlikely places. Those who don&#039;t believe in magic will never find it.&quot; <br /> Roald Dahl

This is nice. It has a deep meaning to it. I would definitely love to know the back story of this particular character and why he/she is dying. The only thing I would say is that it's a little to sticky to be a flowy poem, but it would be perfect as a sort of choppy short story. Does that make sense? Anywhose, I liked this a lot. Keep up the great writing!

on Jan. 18 2014 at 8:15 pm
Cassie3232 BRONZE, Westmansfield, Ohio
2 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself everyone else is taken!

This is very good! but it is also sad