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Jealousy.

January 5, 2014
By BruceK GOLD, San Jose, California
BruceK GOLD, San Jose, California
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My heart cried out in pain
As I saw her smiling at me
What did she ever hope to gain?
My soul will never be free.

After all, she has me enraptured
I could never break free from these bonds
My love is certainly captured
But everything's incredibly wrong.

She smiles for me, but SMILES for someone else
She talks to me, but TALKS to someone else
She hugs me, but HUGS someone else
She walks with me, but WALKS with someone else

Else is the one she loves.

My soul will never be free.


The author's comments:
Ah jealousy.

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on Feb. 18 2014 at 8:10 am
_Tennessee_Love_ BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
¨the difference between promises and memories, is that we break promise and memories break us.¨

I loved this, I can really relate to it, that might be a bad thing lol oh well :)

lexiibeale said...
on Jan. 9 2014 at 5:43 pm
lexiibeale, Germantown, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Colour my life with the chaos of trouble"

I like the overall message of the poem, but I think capitalizing the letters was a bit distracting. Even if you had left them lowercase, the message would have still been there.

Cathyyy SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2014 at 3:54 pm
Cathyyy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
What is life?

This is a really good poem! You're a good writer. :)

BruceK GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2014 at 9:24 am
BruceK GOLD, San Jose, California
10 articles 0 photos 4 comments
Thanks! :)

on Jan. 8 2014 at 8:23 pm
reallifelovelaugh BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Be careful who you trust, because the devil was once a angel too&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~ anonymous~

Reminds me of something I'm going through right now:/ I loved the poem I really related to what ur talking about