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locate the fear

February 18, 2014
By sambamrav SILVER, Rancho Cordova, California
sambamrav SILVER, Rancho Cordova, California
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Locate the fear where is the fear water so dark and deep. What lies at the bottom? Drifting further from the shore caught by the current, splashing around screaming for help swallowing water trying to stay above and not sink, getting tired I can’t take it anymore I give up start sinking water feeling my lungs heart beating slower and slower now at the bottom I lay. What lays at the bottom ?me, I now lay at the bottom.


The author's comments:
in my creative writing class we were working on fear. my fear was drowning.

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