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Just like that he was gone...

April 30, 2014
By Haners456 SILVER, Scappoose, Oregon
Haners456 SILVER, Scappoose, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Fault, dear readers, is not in our stars / but in ourselves." -John Green, Peter Van Houten


Just like that he was gone,
faded like the end of a sad song.
It was for another girl,
it makes me want hurl.
I loved him,
now my world is dark and dim.
He is my light,
without him I have no sight.
I feel all alone,
like I'm in the bottom of an ice-cream cone.
Here it's really cold,
and I feel like I was sold.
Sold for jealousy,
he didn't like me for me.
I was used,
this time he left more than a bruise.
He left an empty soul,
now all I am is black as coal.
Dark as night,
weak in a fight.
Mad as mad hatter,
please get rid of all this chatter!
It's all about him and her,
it all happened in a blur.
I thought it was me,
am I silly for thinking we were meant to be?
I cant let this hurt go away,
it is what keeps me going through my day.
Makes me feel alive,
but I'm barley hanging on like a hive.
I will never say goodbye,
but he already did #sigh.


The author's comments:
My friend wanted a poem about her and boy who left her for another girl and I wrote this. she gave the poem to his new girlfriend and she left him. Everyone told me I needed to have this published and that's what I'm trying to do.

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on Nov. 20 2014 at 8:01 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

Beautiful! I loved it and keep it up and thanks for answering to my post. ;)

on May. 30 2014 at 3:03 pm
Haners456 SILVER, Scappoose, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Fault, dear readers, is not in our stars / but in ourselves." -John Green, Peter Van Houten

Thank you very much! and i will post more when i have insperation to write more hah!

P. said...
on May. 30 2014 at 11:27 am
Thank you very much! And dont worry i will be writing more haha

MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on May. 29 2014 at 9:03 pm
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions. - James Michener

I liked both of your poems, you should post some more! I love the simple way you write, with two rhyming lines over and over. Your poems are easy and fun to read.