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Set me free

June 2, 2014
By Beaniebaby123 PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
Beaniebaby123 PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Give a man a fish he eats for day, teach a man to fish he eats for a lifetime."


I love you lots
I love you none
You stepped on my heart
That wasn't fun

You took away
my hopes and dreams
you told me no;never,
you can't be set free

He said
"I wan't you chained,
I wan't you bound,
I wan't you to sleep
not safe, nor sound"

The life you gave
was never mine
You never came to close,
you didn't take the time

But, what really hurt
were the words that you said,
"You're just like your mom,
I wish you were dead!"

One day, your words
are gonna take a toll
you just might find me bloody
on the grassy knoll

Bloody, and bleeding
with blood gushing out
You make me wanna scream,
you make me wanna shout

I'm gonna be dying,
and all your probably gonna say is,
"You're just like your mom,
now get the **** outta my way!"



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on Sep. 13 2014 at 1:20 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

I can relate to this poem in more than one way, and it gives me the chills :) I love the way you explain everything, and the words flow very well together. Most people don't think that what they say to someone could really affect them in this way, but it does, and their words hurt. Excellent ob at getting your concepts out, I expect to see great things from you :)

on Jun. 20 2014 at 6:16 pm
malloryryan07 BRONZE, Brookwood, Alabama
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Good concept; I can tell it's really personal to you. Try working on your spelling though!