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Sadness Overload
June 2, 2014
When you see my crying face
I wan't you to know
that I wan't to
leave this place
The open-ended sadness
and my long drawn out cry
Is the perfect start
to the perfect goodbye
My heart was ripped
and lefted to die
You crushed it with your shoe
and thus; it couldn't leave and fly
I lefted without my dignity
I lefted withoutmy hope
the last thing i heard from you
were the words,"I wan't you to go!"
© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico
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WinterRose76 SILVER said...
on Jun. 28 2014 at 1:44 pm
Good poem, but you have quite a few grammatical errors. "Wan't" (want) is not a contraction and "lefted" (left) is not a word. You also forgot to capitalize your "I" in the second to last line. Other than those fixable mistakes, I think this is a great piece! 4/5
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