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Be The Real You

June 30, 2014
By CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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I’ve been alive for more then a decade but still have barely seen anything,
I’ve been in school for nearly a decade but still know less then what’s out there.

We spend all these years trying to feed our minds with facts about our planet,
Just to die and be reborn again and to do the same exact thing again.

Why do we waste our time doing this?
Following the same pattern over and over again.

Why do people murder out of cold blood?
Just to become a serial killer in the following years.

People say that in order to see the beauty of the Earth,
You have to be pure.
Make no mistakes, never be a real person,
Be a Liar.

© Sarah I., Surrey, BC, Canada

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Nobuo GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2014 at 3:49 pm
Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
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I like it, but I feel you have more to say.  As if at the end you're stopping and you're about to continue.  I might elaborate a bit more or tell more of your personal emotion in it, tell something more
LyricBlunt said...
on Oct. 23 2014 at 4:44 pm
LyricBlunt, Denver, Colorado
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"Music expresses who you are as a person." "Oh, butterfingers."Opportunities' come when you least expect it, it is all up to you what you do with them. Life sometimes throws you a curveball, you just got to go with it sometimes.

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good work, I will try to be the real me
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 2:25 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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I wrote this because people think that they need to lie about themselves. So i was pretty much saying that instead of lieing about their lives and being a Liar they should just be who they want to be.
midnightwoah said...
on Jul. 10 2014 at 10:45 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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&quot;We accept the love we think we deserve.&quot; -Stephen Chbosky

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There was a lot of issues going on in each sentence I was lost at the liar part. Could you explain in a reply please?
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2014 at 7:18 pm
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&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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Great imagery and imagination i loved it. And I surely agree with you. Thanks for being honest and sharing this with us :)
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 1 2014 at 6:14 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

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