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Daddy's Little Girl

July 6, 2014
By Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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"You May Encounter Many Defeats But You Must Not Be Defeated" By- Dr. Maya Angelou

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You Left Me When I Was Young
Not Knowing What I Would Become
Let Me Tell You A Few Things About Me
I Am Not The Same Little Girl, You Saw At The Age Threee
Despite Of All The Pain You Put In My Life
I Am A Lot Stronger And Wiser Than I Ever Been
I Had A Lot Of People Tell Me They Love Me
But It Turns Out The Are Just Being Phoney
I Don't Even Remember How Love Feels Anymore
But You KNow What I Am Just Keeping It Real
I Am Just Wondering How Did You Sleep At Night
Knowing What You Did Wasn't Right
You Don't Know How Long I Have Waited For This Day
Where All The Pain And Suffering Will Go Away
I Can't Believe I Had The Nerve To Call You My Dad
I Use To Think Me Not Seeing You Was Wrong
But It Turns Out She Was Protecting Me All Along
From All The Pain And Misery You Would Bring
Don't Act Like You Care Because Now You Little Girl Is All Grown Up Now You See

© Josiah H., Scarsdale, NY

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KaavyaM SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2014 at 9:42 am
KaavyaM SILVER, Hyderabad, Other
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To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all.

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This piece is strong, and real, and emotional and absolutely beautiful.The only issue I have is with your capitalisation of every word, which is hugely distracting. Great job though.
Longlegs GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2014 at 8:31 am
Longlegs GOLD, Greeneville, Tennessee
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This is so full of emotion...I can't believe it is possible to express so much in a single poem.
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2014 at 8:33 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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This poem really speaks to me because I was put up for adoption at a very young age, thank you for so much for asking me to read it
malloryryan07 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 12 2014 at 8:56 pm
malloryryan07 BRONZE, Brookwood, Alabama
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So emotional.. Excellent joob putting that emotion into words.
Myvoice4change SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2014 at 7:42 am
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nice rhyming scheme, and you obviously put emotion into this <3
Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 12:27 pm
Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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Thanks! 
HudaZav SILVER said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 12:23 pm
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Oh wow, this left me speechless... There was so much emotion in this piece, great job! I think the only thing you could improve on is grammar, but besides that, this piece is perfect!