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Mind, Heart, Soul

July 11, 2014
By Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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"You May Encounter Many Defeats But You Must Not Be Defeated" By- Dr. Maya Angelou

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In My Mind I Will Always Be A Failure
In My Mind I Will Always Never Be Good Enough For You
In My Mind I Will Always Be The Girl On The Unknown Path
In My Heart I Strive For Something More
In My Heart I Strive To Make You Proud
In My Heart I Strive To Be Alive
In My Soul I Travel Alone And Lost
In My Soul I Believe
In My Soul I Will Be.....

© Francesca Y., Robbinsdale, MN

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WritinGirl PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 26 2014 at 12:02 am
WritinGirl PLATINUM, DeKalb, Illinois
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“There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you.” ~Maya Angelou

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Nice job, but I do have to say the capitals were a little overkill. It made it harder to read--and the second line, it might flow a little better to say "in my mind I will always be never good enough...", instead of what you have, but that's minor--you still did great :)
MalaikaJ GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2014 at 1:16 pm
MalaikaJ GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
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This is really good. The repetition helps to make your point and it ties in with the title really well. Every word being capitalized was really distracting for me, though.
elycavill SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2014 at 9:42 am
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I felt as if cut of from people on the moment, and could ( or thought I could) see what you wrote! I really like it, with the meaning and emotions! Good work! :)