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Falling

September 22, 2014
By Beaniebaby123 PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
Beaniebaby123 PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Give a man a fish he eats for day, teach a man to fish he eats for a lifetime."


Falling

and

Falling...

as I look into your eyes

where did all the days pass by?

 

Falling 

and

Falling...

as I take your hand,

so weak that I can barely stand

 

Falling

and

Falling...

with you by my side,

I feel like there's nothing I have to hide

 

Falling 

and

Falling...

into your heart

There's absolutely nothing, that can break us apart

 

Falling

and 

Falling...

you take hold of me

mind and body, for all eternity

 

Falling 

and

Falling...

into your soul

always and always, to have and to hold

 

Falling 

and

Falling...

as you grow near

you come closer and whisper, "there's no need to fear"

 

Falling

and

Falling...

as your lips touch mine

when did the days pass us by?



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on Sep. 29 2014 at 12:09 pm
AprilNicoleJones BRONZE, New Castle, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I write only because<br /> there is a voice within me<br /> that will not be still.&quot;<br /> ~ SYLVIA PLATH<br /> <br /> (MY FORMER ACCOUNTS: Icantwrite &amp; Punk.Snowflake)<br /> Published poems from my former accounts:<br /> - FRAIL HOPE (Icantwrite)<br /> - YOURSELF (Punk.Snowflake)

Hi! First, I really like this poem. I like your use of repetition with the word "falling" because it adds a much more interesting dimension to the poem. Also, the topic you used is a little cliche (falling in love) but you made it unique. In all, I really like this poem! If you'd please drop by my page and leave a comment on my poem "Eccentric" I would really appreciate it. Thanks!