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Poem 29

April 8, 2015
By Bri_Christine PLATINUM, DuBois, Pennsylvania
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One day, you will be lying

in a big, white, crisp bed

with a naked woman

on your arm

and turn to look at the clock

slide into its second hour

The church bells strike

and their holy music

slips in the window

with the cool breeze

and dances around the dark Room.

Then, you will think of me.

© Becky G., Westerville, OH

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Bri_Christine PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 9 2015 at 11:50 am
Bri_Christine PLATINUM, DuBois, Pennsylvania
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Thank you!
Bri_Christine PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 9 2015 at 11:50 am
Bri_Christine PLATINUM, DuBois, Pennsylvania
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Thank you so so much!
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 9 2015 at 11:07 am
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The poem is really strong, dear writer, and written wonderfully- the length and line breaks are perfectly suited with the overall vibe. Awesome work, please keep writing.
elycavill SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2015 at 4:08 pm
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It seems like entering the time of romatism and naturalism in literature- it describes bare details and the feeling beneath it. Really love it