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Darkness or Fire

May 21, 2015
By theanonreader GOLD, Pensacola, Florida
theanonreader GOLD, Pensacola, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
you can tell a lot about a person by the books he reads<br /> -unknown


Darkness
Engulfing and pressing.
However, that won’t stop me.
I am real. I am alive.
I am stronger than something as trivial as this.
I will not be stopped.
I cannot be stopped.
I may not see the light now but that doesn’t mean it's not there.
There is a fire in me that will light my way.



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on Aug. 26 2015 at 10:45 pm
EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
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I really like it! My only piece of advice, and maybe this is just me personally, but I would suggest trying to develop more of a storyline. This poem was short and beautiful, but it didnt seem to go anywhere. Still great though, keep writing!