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Coming Home

December 29, 2015
By hello_world SILVER, South Pasadena, California
hello_world SILVER, South Pasadena, California
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What went well? What did not go so well, what would you change?

Make sure to phrase your responses in the present tense.
Make sure to phrase your response in the positive tense:

So, are you having fun?
You don’t have to help. You can go home. It’s late.
No, it’s okay, I’m here anyways.
But,
Fine.

So, did you have a good time?
He’s still here.
I know.

So, can I have a ride home?
Aw, I’m really sorry, I’m getting a ride from her.
It's ok.

He left with her.
He laughs with them.
He laughs with her.
He talks to me.
He talks to them.
He laughs with them.

They hold each other.
I hold the night.
I phrase my response.
I phrase my response in a stutter.



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