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Dreamland

April 10, 2018
By RayRae PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
RayRae PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
26 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality." ~ Lewis Carroll's Cheshire Cat


There is a place,
Among the stars,
Over the rainbow,
And I look for it from afar.

A place called Dreamland,
Where wishes come true.
It shimmers brightly,
As all dreams do.

It helps grant one’s deepest desire’s,
When they make a wish,
To the night sky,
And it brings them only bliss.

It’s a beautiful palace built on hope,
With a stunning queen,
She is graceful and humble,
And caring as can be.

She works hard to help others,
And vanquish the places our doubts lurk.
Though she tries to do as much as she can,
She does not do all the work.

You see this queen grants strength,
And love too,
But in the end,
It’s up to you.



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on Apr. 30 2018 at 10:12 pm
RayRae PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
26 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality." ~ Lewis Carroll's Cheshire Cat

Thank for the compliment, and the constructive criticism! I'll keep that in mind for next time!

karisuna GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2018 at 2:56 pm
karisuna GOLD, Pinellas Park, Florida
19 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The flower that blooms in adversity is the most rare and beautiful of them all." -The Emperor, Mulan<br /> <br /> "Let go of anger, let go of pride, when you are bound by nothing, you go beyond sorrow." -Buddha

Nice imagery! "Desire" should be left by itself.