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in love

June 4, 2018
By clarkjames SILVER, Olympia, Washington
clarkjames SILVER, Olympia, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
i wonder if you look both ways when you cross my mind<br /> -tyler, the creator


i loved you

so i let you go

but now i’m alone

alone

alone

alone

and unable to stop myself from doing things that i shouldn’t


The author's comments:

falling out of love is really difficult because you are constantly reminded of someone you can't see again and that person isn't around to help you :/


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on Aug. 16 2018 at 1:23 pm
this_unflower PLATINUM, Lincoln, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i will never understand<br /> why you held me<br /> if you were afraid of warmth<br /> <br /> you should have known<br /> i was fire<br /> <br /> - Rupi Kaur , the sun and her flowers

This poem, I love this poem, and the others "you broke me" and "why I've been weird lately". We have different styles that both speak to similar genres concerning pain, love and loss and the internal battle that comes with that. Missing people we shouldn't, loving people we shouldn't, over and over. As poets we fall the hardest and hurt the most, but as poets we have to love. I feel like you are someone who can truly understand where I'm coming from....TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/999620/Bitter-Sweet-Summer, TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/999621/What-Couldve-Been, TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/999636/Eyes-Closed, TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/999634/Poets-Shouldnt-Love. These a four pieces of my work that I figured you might understand since, in a way, I guess you've been there. Anyway, keep writing, your work is absolute gold.