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November 23, 2009
By BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Rolling slowly by,

Clouds fill the afternoon sky,

Masking blue behind them.



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© Victoria F., Roswell, GA

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Mimi15 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 22 2012 at 12:01 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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Check out my haiku broke? :)
dragonfly95 SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 8:54 am
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
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&#039;&#039; there is nothing to fear but fear its self&#039;&#039;

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awsome....please check out my work sometime.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 11:26 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

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Simple, yet powerful. This is why I love the haiku format~ Good job!

 

IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 12:54 pm
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Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Oh wow, beautiful, though not as emotional as it could/should be. That is, if you were going for a traditional haiku.
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 2:53 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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thanks for the comment! 

-Roze

pnkninja11 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 7:33 am
pnkninja11 BRONZE, Partlow, Virginia
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Great imagery! Keep up the good work! :D
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 2:18 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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That's what my poems are for!  Not exactly to make you smile, but to show emotion's progress.  :D  Thanks!

-Rose

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 2:17 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Why shanks!  ;)

-Rose

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 2:16 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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ahem.  I meant *glad.

-Rose

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 2:16 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Thanks so much for the comment, I'm super gald u liked it  :D  Of course I'll check out your work, I look forward to it!
Kali123 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 7:44 am
Kali123 BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
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really leaves the reader wonder..Great
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 8:47 pm
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Wow!! this is really good-i especially like the last line-its really good!! awesome job!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!:)
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 8:06 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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:DDDD that made me smile :))))
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 7:23 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Thanks so much, I'm happy to know you liked it! 

-Rose

LiquidSky PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:53 pm
LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
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"Masking blue behind them"
My favorite part ^_^
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 7:38 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Thanks so much for the comment!  :)
Bearded Goth Girl said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 5:50 am
This peom is really peaceful i love it
Brittaner DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 3:58 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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&quot;words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them&quot; <br /> -Me (random thought)

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Your welcome!
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 4:50 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Thanks for the comment!

-Rose
Brittaner DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 8:09 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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&quot;words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them&quot; <br /> -Me (random thought)

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Nice piece. I liked your description.