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Unrequited Love
October 19, 2010
While I am in your
Tight embrace- the winter winds
Cannot chill my bones
Because I can be
No colder than when I am
In your clutching arms
© Lindsey D., Marblehead, MA
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This article has 8 comments.
bellariptor PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 9:24 am
This is so beautiful. I can def. relate!
Prometheus PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:47 am
This should be in the Mag!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 11:29 pm
Good job... And the verses are really haikus... :))
SHORT BUT SWEET!! :))
SHORT BUT SWEET!! :))
xxMaddCatxx BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2010 at 6:28 am
Wow that was great! I read the first few lines and was like, how in the world is this about unrequited love? After I read the last three lines, I was like O.O It gave me chills! It was like, really really really great! Great doesn't even describe it, it's that good!
TheGraeWolf GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 12:23 pm
The first bit appears to be sweet, like a romantic line to a lover, but it turns out it's false and the love is not shared by both. Excellent job, I find this very unique. :)
Healing_Angel SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 6:59 pm
I read this poem imagining someone begging to be loved, desperate for acceptance. it has a cold distant feel to it too as though the person who is trying to get away is thinking "I don't love you, can't you see that?" It's really good.
Me reading first two lines: *aww cute* :)
Me reading rest of the poem: O.o
Wow. Where did this come from? It is definitely not cute. Actually, it's kind of haunting...and I'm not entirely sure what I think of it...which I suppose is a good thing, because it makes the poem interesting. Is this from personal experience? It seems genuine, so either it is, or you are a very good liar. :)
