Greyness | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Haiku
  4. Greyness

Greyness

July 22, 2011
By Vicky11 SILVER, Charlottenlund, Other
More by this author
Vicky11 SILVER, Charlottenlund, Other
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
The wisest men follow their own direction - Euripides

View profile

Grey people with grey
souls they forget to see the
rainbow, that is life

© Angela K., Kansasville, WI

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Riding
By Sara Smith BRONZE
Lubbock, Texas
Sara Smith BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Texas Football
By Darren Alexander BRONZE
Lubbock, Texas
Darren Alexander BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Love of Texas
By Princess21 BRONZE
Wolfforth, Texas
Princess21 BRONZE, Wolfforth, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
A Wild Ride
By KelseyRo BRONZE
Wolfforth, Texas
KelseyRo BRONZE, Wolfforth, Texas
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
My Texas
By tori_Lou GOLD
Wolfforth, Texas
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

View profile
Poetry
A stormy Night
By Anonymous

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 15 comments.

billgamesh11 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 1:15 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 278 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

View profile
Ikr! I'm not really a fan of poetry either, but this one was ok! Nice job! Keep writing because you, my friend, have a power to knock the socks off non-poetry lovers!!!:):):);)
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 5:10 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

View profile
Yep - so true! I like this haiku alot!
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 4:29 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

View profile
I really really like the meaning behind this.  I really like your writing, it's thought provoking!!!!! Keep writing!!!!!! :D
ohheyyyelli SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 12:51 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
5 articles 3 photos 178 comments
View profile
I love the deep meaning in the short poem. You're poems have great messages. You are a talented writer!
Shayna121 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 7:25 pm
Shayna121 GOLD, Port Charlotte, Florida
12 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the master of my fate and the captain of my soul.

View profile
One word: Deep.
PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 3:32 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay golden&quot;<br /> - Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

View profile
hmm. So true. 
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:34 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 577 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

View profile
I started reading this and then I got to the end and... wow. Amazing. I really love the contrast of colors that kind of just exploded in my mind. :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 10:22 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

View profile
i like this poem it was beautiful great job hope u get more posted on here
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 6:02 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
42 articles 11 photos 333 comments
View profile
I love this poem, but I think it might be better if it weren't a haiku. I think it would make more sense if you rearranged it a little.
lilmartz PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 10:38 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
40 articles 5 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

View profile
I couldn't find your article "Barbarism" but I really like this haiku! I gave it 5/5 stars
Danealle SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:34 pm
Danealle SILVER, Wheeling, Illinois
7 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anything is possible with a smile and goal in mind.

View profile
Short but to the point! Very powerful! 
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 2:31 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

View profile
I love this and completely agree with it! I wish people would see life for what it is. I wish they would push aside the grey fog that is clouding their vision so that they could see the rainbows. good job!
ohmakemeover BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 1:57 pm
ohmakemeover BRONZE, Centerville, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Touch comes before sight, before speech. It is the first language and the last, and it always tells the truth.&quot;- Margaret Atwood

View profile
I really like the message of this haiku.  It almost comes off as cynicism but I can hear what you are trying to say!
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 10:59 am
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

View profile
this is really true i agree! and yeah i'm not a big fan of haikus either but this is  really good!
TwasBrilling BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:24 am
TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk&quot; -H.W. Hegel<br /> <br /> &quot;Words are our most inexhaustable source of magic&#039; -Albus Dumbledore

View profile
So true! ...I'm usually not a fan of haikus, but this one is nice, because it actually has a message!