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Compassion

July 15, 2011
By poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
eARTh


Touch my heart with your
love, and I will return it
with great compassion.


The author's comments:
I wanted to try a Haiku because they are a week point in my writing! What do you think?

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LouieHan GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 4:26 pm
LouieHan GOLD, San Marino, California
14 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Xiao Dre, when life knocks you down, you can choose, whether or not, to get back up<br /> -Jackie Chan as Mr. Han

this was short and very direct. i like it!

on Aug. 7 2011 at 8:50 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
eARTh

Thank you so much too!!!!

on Aug. 7 2011 at 7:29 pm
inkblot13 PLATINUM, Auburn, New York
41 articles 1 photo 160 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If I knew where poems came from, I&#039;d go there&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Michael Langley, &#039;Staying Alive&#039;

5 out of 5 stars! Great job :)

on Aug. 7 2011 at 5:01 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
eARTh

Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Aug. 7 2011 at 12:59 am
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

I think , I love it !