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A Fatal Wish

July 29, 2011
By Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

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A wish because I
Want it. Fatal since with it,
I’m not me at all.

© Maghan D., Athens, AL

The author's comments:
I hope you grasp my meaning. It can actually be for anything; for me, the wish is to be someone else, yet if I were someone else, it wouldn't be the same for me as for them. It's better to simply accept yourself. :)
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Calliashi SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2011 at 9:44 am
Calliashi SILVER, Litchfield Park, Arizona
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The man with the key is king and honey, you should see me in a crown. ~James Moriarty

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I feel this way a lot. Good job putting it into such simple words!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 5:21 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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I like this haiku. I like the meaning and how you express it! Great job!
MorenSore SILVER said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 10:09 am
MorenSore SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Oddly worded but in a philosophical way.
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 1:02 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
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I actually really liked the wording, and i definitely grasped the meaning. Great job! 5/5 :)
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
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I understan what your trying to say , but the wording is odd. I understand that it's a haiku and that it has to be written a certain way.

Otherwise , good job. It said alot with a little :)