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Time Flies

December 28, 2011
By meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
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meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways."

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time flies, with all the
lies, that come and go, at their
owners' clear leisure

© Rachel U., Danbury, CT

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oh, boredom... it can lead to such great things!
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browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 10:11 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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I'll try and read it sometime this weekend...sounds great!! :)
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 4:24 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways.&quot;

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okay! it is about sibling rivalry... like stepbrothers but more serious and about sisters! it is kinda based on me and my sister and our relationship :P
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 4:24 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways.&quot;

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okay! it is about sibling rivalry... likestepbrothers but more serious and about sisters! it is kinda based on me and my sister and our relationship :P
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 6:58 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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Well...let me know when it is and I'll read it! :)
starrfishy said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 6:01 pm
starrfishy, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am thankful for laughter, except when milk comes out of my nose&quot; -Joci Mulherin (aka...my fabulous and adorable little sister.)

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few words, but straight and clear to the point. i like it:)
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 5:57 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways.&quot;

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*short story
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 5:56 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways.&quot;

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thank you! i'm working on a sort story that will be done in couple weeks!
sany.lastflame PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 5:19 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
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I love this poem! It does feel like its missing something. If I were you, I would change the second line and use some different, more powerful word choice that really draws the reader in, like the very last line!
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:25 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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You're awsome meals...write more!!!
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:06 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways.&quot;

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thanks! (:
Fabala_G BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:02 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Try to learn to breathe deeply,<br /> really to taste food when you eat,<br /> and when you sleep, really to sleep.<br /> Try as much as possible to be<br /> wholly alive, with all your might,<br /> and when you laugh, laugh like hell,<br /> and when you get angry, get good<br /> and angry. Try to be alive. You will<br /> be dead soon enough.&quot;<br /> William Saroyan

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I like the internal rhyme! Good job!
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:45 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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If you get a moment you shoul check out some of my stuff.... :)
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:41 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways.&quot;

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thank you!(:
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 2:54 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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I like it. Not everyone can pull a haiku off...