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Everlasting Pain

January 26, 2012
By babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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I was rejected
It feels like a broken bone
That can never heal

© Greg K., New Lenox, IL

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Once again, it comes from the heart. Please, the ones who hurt me, stop.
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Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 9:24 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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Great Poem
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 3:55 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thanks! :D
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 19 2012 at 7:50 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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I agree with the cliche part about this poem too, but not so much my others. This does lack description and a lot of other things, but I admit its tough to create a 3 line poem.
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 19 2012 at 7:48 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you I appreciate your advice.
daph199 SILVER said...
on Feb. 19 2012 at 5:59 pm
daph199 SILVER, Burlington, New Jersey
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it's cute because it is a haiku. i've read a few of your poems, and my advice would be to try to step a little more out of the box. like here you took a pretty cliche comment and put it to the format of a haiku, making it a little different. so my advice is just stay a lilll more away from the cliche and you'll be fine:)
britt101 said...
on Feb. 19 2012 at 12:49 pm
britt101, Clanton, Alabama
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i can do all things through him who strengthens me

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this is a really good poemi like it
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 1:26 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you, and don't worry I will ;D
C.K.Snow said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 1:21 pm
This is very good poem and you describe saddness well. Keep up the good work!
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 1:03 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you so much :D!
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 1:03 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you :)
Aaka131 SILVER said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 12:05 pm
Aaka131 SILVER, Dunbar, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don&#039;t matter and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&quot; -Dr. Seuss

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Short and full of emotion I love it!
MaryEllenCags SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 6:28 pm
MaryEllenCags SILVER, Fanwood, New Jersey
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&quot;I&#039;m not an arsonist. But I am a pyromaniac.&quot; -Kieth Richards, Life

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I feel your pain from these 17 beautiful syllables.
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 1:33 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\&quot;<br /> <br /> Author Unknown

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Thank you so much :).
Loftus GOLD said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 8:20 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
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&quot;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who&#039;ll decide where you&#039;ll go.&quot; -Dr. Seuss

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Super short. Super beautiful. Love this.