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Shattered

April 11, 2012
By Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
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Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
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&quot;I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot;<br /> -Edgar Allan Poe<br /> (this summarizes my life)

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My heart is shattered,
Thousands of pieces implode.
Forever fractured.

© Gary C., Pequannock, NJ

The author's comments:
A haiku for divorce; the inability to live without a parent, a parent who has gone forever.
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Rebecca.xx BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2013 at 9:14 pm
Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot;<br /> -Edgar Allan Poe<br /> (this summarizes my life)

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Thanks so much! It means a lot :)
Metalhead08 GOLD said...
on May. 21 2013 at 10:01 pm
Metalhead08 GOLD, Port Republic, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather hate you for everything you are. Than ever love you for something you are not. &quot; FFDP &quot;You&#039;re born alone and you die alone&quot; FFDP &quot;I wonder out where you can&#039;t see, inside my shell I wait and bleed.&quot; Slipknot &quot; If youre 555 then I am 666&quot;

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Ww this is very well put together! I typically don't care for haikus but this really mesmerized me! Very compelling!
Rebecca.xx BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2013 at 7:49 pm
Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot;<br /> -Edgar Allan Poe<br /> (this summarizes my life)

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Ha thank you I'm glad I made an exception for you!
Wings10FeetTall GOLD said...
on May. 21 2013 at 7:44 am
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

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This is really good! I liked, which is pretty amazing since I don't like hakius.
Rebecca.xx BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:41 am
Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot;<br /> -Edgar Allan Poe<br /> (this summarizes my life)

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I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Let me know if there's anything you would like me to look at for you :)
Rebecca.xx BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2013 at 5:41 am
Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot;<br /> -Edgar Allan Poe<br /> (this summarizes my life)

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Thank you so much! I know it's very short so I was a bit nervous it may seem lazy but I just love how sweet and poignant it is. I'd be glad to read your haiku!
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on May. 20 2013 at 10:58 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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&quot;Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light&quot; --Dylan Thomas

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Wow deep. I love this soo much, and the story behind it just gives it that extra mile. great job. Beautiful work you have soo far. Oh, and if it is not too much to ask, could you take a look at my haiku Winters Song, just want to know what you think! Brilliant job, keep rockin
ChocolateLove SILVER said...
on May. 20 2013 at 11:11 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
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A love haikus, they manage to have a deep message in just a couple of lines. This is exactly what you did in this poem. I love it :D