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July 16, 2013
By Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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a child's desperate
cry followed by his mother's
soothing lullaby

© Julianne D., Louisville, KY

The author's comments:
Just trying to follow the silent footsteps of haiku ninjas like Basho.
(The pic was too cute to pass up.)
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Mckay ELITE said...
on Sep. 2 2013 at 9:46 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Thanks. There's so little in the world that yet remains cute and innocent. Thank you for your kind words. 
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2013 at 6:54 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

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AWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT IS SO CUTE I AM ACTUALLY TEARING UP. WHY, WORLD? WHY? I love how you contrasted ideas here XD Awesome job!