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October 3, 2013
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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Morning dew glistens
On a galaxy in the rafters
Spun by a spider.

© Melissa P., Oley, PA

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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Oct. 10 2013 at 7:26 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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Thank you so much.
JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2013 at 12:37 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
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&quot;If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, &#039;I just don&#039;t care.&#039;?&quot;

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This is incredible! You are just so good at haikus!!! :)
Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 6:13 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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No prob. ^u^
GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 5:59 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it :D
Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 5:40 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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(Just in case my first post doesn't show up...) With a poem so small as this one, you were able to perfectly describe something grandiose. The image of the spider's web to some may seem insignificant; nonetheless you captured its beauty here. Congrats on yet another Editors' Choice.