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Web_________

October 3, 2013
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments

Morning dew glistens
On a galaxy in the rafters
Spun by a spider.



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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Oct. 10 2013 at 7:26 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thank you so much.

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2013 at 12:37 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 523 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, &#039;I just don&#039;t care.&#039;?&quot;

This is incredible! You are just so good at haikus!!! :)

Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 6:13 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

No prob. ^u^

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 5:59 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it :D

Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 5:40 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

(Just in case my first post doesn't show up...) With a poem so small as this one, you were able to perfectly describe something grandiose. The image of the spider's web to some may seem insignificant; nonetheless you captured its beauty here. Congrats on yet another Editors' Choice.