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October 30, 2013
By ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

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&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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My heart is but your
instrument; played and strummed to
your liking, not mine

My mind lays in your
custody; locked behind tuned
strings and fastened gears.

© Brooke S., Indianapolis, IN

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ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on May. 24 2014 at 2:59 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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Thank you! By the way, I think your haiku Blue Awakening is fantastic!
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on May. 24 2014 at 2:58 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it!
JRaye PLATINUM said...
on May. 18 2014 at 9:07 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 523 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, &#039;I just don&#039;t care.&#039;?&quot;

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Man, this is some powerful stuff. Really, truly great work :)
WinterRose76 SILVER said...
on May. 17 2014 at 6:15 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

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Wow...this is spectacularly creative and well-written! I can see why you recieved an Editor's Choice. Nicely done! 5/5
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 6:02 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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Yeah it's been awhile.....thank you for still remembering who I am ;) and thanks for commenting! We really haven't spoken in a bit, so how are you doing?
Mckay ELITE said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 1:55 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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I've missed you friend. It's so nice to back here till God knows when. Your poetry is still stunning as ever. Eerie...but compelling me to always come back for more. Congrats on another Editors' Choice for another idealistic haiku with sincere emotion. 
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 3 2013 at 2:30 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.&rdquo;<br /> - Martin Luther King Jr.

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Thank you very much for the kind words. I appreciate it!
411Ellie PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 3 2013 at 10:37 am
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Paper is more patient than people.&quot; &ndash;Anne Frank

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Again, you have blown me away!!