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Murder

January 29, 2014
By Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
28 articles 13 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream<br /> -Edgar Allen Poe


Hearing screams at night
He flees into the darkness
Running forever



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on May. 14 2014 at 5:46 pm
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
28 articles 13 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream<br /> -Edgar Allen Poe

Awe, thank you. You made my day, and this wasnt a good day at all untill I read your comments. Thank you, and read on ;)

on May. 13 2014 at 11:17 pm
Love2Read72 PLATINUM, Kentfield, California
24 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life isn&rsquo;t about how to survive the storm, it&rsquo;s about learning to dance in the rain.&rdquo; &mdash; Taylor Swift

Not insulting haikus, they just can be hard to write, but you did a great job.

on May. 13 2014 at 11:16 pm
Love2Read72 PLATINUM, Kentfield, California
24 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life isn&rsquo;t about how to survive the storm, it&rsquo;s about learning to dance in the rain.&rdquo; &mdash; Taylor Swift

Haikus are bad with the slightest mistake, but this one isn't bad.

on Feb. 4 2014 at 6:31 pm
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
28 articles 13 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream<br /> -Edgar Allen Poe

it was something we did in class. we were suppose to do 3 haikus and so this was one of them. My teacher said they didnt have to be about nature so I always have to find a loop hole in w writing project at school to where I can have something dark and maybe graphic. :) I love it

on Feb. 4 2014 at 5:54 pm
Bay_Renee SILVER, Brinkhaven, Ohio
7 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Kites rise the highest when going against the wind.&quot; <br /> -Winston Churchill

   This is pretty cool! Haiku's are always hard for me to read or write because they're so short and I am a very extensive writer and I like to read extensive writing, but this was an exception. This conveyed a dark feeling and would be good inspiration for a longer story containing the same sort of darkness. Good job- five stars!=]