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I Love the Way. . .

September 28, 2009
By BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 37 comments

I love the way you look a me
you long to make me smile.
It's apart of your trickery
to keep my heart for awhile.

I love the way you treat this girl
you renew her spirit from within.
You make her love you more and more,
but she battles the conquering of sin.

I love the way you are spiritually stable
because it brings me closer to God.
You might not know, but it makes me able
to express my spiritual feelings aloud.

Gosh, I love the way you respect this girl
you never fail to show your appreciation.
You always make her feel well-deserved
and you love to reach her expectations.

I'm so happy you finally made me that girl,
that I consistently dreamed to be
each time I get stronger when I
think about the future of you and me.



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Ktaylorxo GOLD said...
on Sep. 29 2011 at 3:48 pm
Ktaylorxo GOLD, Little Egg Harbor, New Jersey
13 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everybody in this world will hurt you. You just gotta stick with the ones worth suffering for.

This is so pretty!

daponie SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 9:53 am
daponie SILVER, Lagos, Other
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon.

This is soo nice!!!

on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:08 pm
Lauren826 SILVER, Old River, Texas
5 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;To thine own self be true.&quot; - Christina Perri.<br /> <br /> &quot;Nothing lasts forever for all good things its true id rather trade it all by somehow saving you.&quot; - Avenged Sevenfold.

This is really good!

on May. 20 2011 at 11:20 pm
thank you so much!

on May. 20 2011 at 9:32 am
AMAZING IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY!!!

on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:24 pm
great rhyme scheme

on Mar. 15 2011 at 8:03 pm
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
My fav quote (4now)<br /> When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon &amp; cold became heat.... Roses weren&#039;t red an violetes weren&#039;t blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU &lt;3

awwww... this was so sweet n im shure that if u wrote it about sum1 they luved it

on Feb. 21 2011 at 1:53 pm
luvsoccer3000 SILVER, Abington, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You can turn off the sun, but I&#039;m still gonna shine.&rdquo; jason mraz

this is so adorable! i really love it. it really speaks to me

Lilium BRONZE said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 3:12 pm
Lilium BRONZE, Marysville, Washington
1 article 12 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you don&#039;t try, you&#039;ll never know.<br /> <br /> There is hope, you just have to search your heart for it.

That's so sweet!!! It sounds like it should be a song!! Great work.

on Nov. 27 2010 at 7:56 pm
thanks for the comments guys !

on Nov. 25 2010 at 10:24 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
224 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A day without laughter is a day wasted&quot; -Charlie Chaplin

Wow that was really very sweet. I really liked it!

kemmie SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2010 at 12:30 pm
kemmie SILVER, Lagos, Other
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;m going to be famous!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice job!!!!!!!!

on Oct. 14 2010 at 11:21 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 37 comments
Thanks !! I'll try to put more work up so, keep checking me out and I'll return the favor !!

on Oct. 14 2010 at 11:20 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 37 comments
Thank you so much!I appreciate your comment and I'm glad it's your fav. by far ;-) !!

on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:58 pm
Countrygirl4ever BRONZE, Bloomer, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
This is an AMAZING poem, love it so much. nice work :)

ellie75 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:52 pm
ellie75 BRONZE, Nunica, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments
i love this poem. amazing job(: my favorite by far.

on Sep. 27 2010 at 11:32 am
thank you so much!

on Sep. 20 2010 at 10:12 am
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says &quot;another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell&quot;

isnt it so romatic? this poem is great!!!!

on May. 11 2010 at 7:12 pm
Courtnay BRONZE, McDonald, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

I LUV IT!!!!.....i belive most people can relate to this.....i agree 5 $t@r$!!  ....comment  on some of mine whenever you get a chance??....

 


on Apr. 26 2010 at 8:15 pm
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
40 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If youre a bird, Im a bird.&quot;

It is very good :) I like it five stars